The hyena sighed. He was so hungry. He hadn't eaten in two days. Living in this miserable jungle was no fun. The hyena was really a nice creature and he wouldn't eat another animal no matter how hungry he was. When he thought he should just curl up and start to die here, he saw the sunlight shining on a big grey rock. Then the hyena saw a ........... sandwich! He started to eagerly climb the rock. When got to the top, a parrot swooped down and scoffed the sandwich. "So much for that" thought the hyena. The sight of his lunch eaten, made him hungrier.
The hyena sighed. He was so hungry. He hadn't eaten in two days. Living in this miserable jungle was no fun. The hyena was really a nice creature and he wouldn't eat another animal no matter how hungry he was. When he thought he should just curl up and start to die here, he saw the sunlight shining on a big grey rock. Then the hyena saw a ........... sandwich! He started to eagerly climb the rock. When got to the top, a parrot swooped down and scoffed the sandwich. "So much for that" thought the hyena. The sight of his lunch eaten, made him hungrier.
4 Comments
Peter Roche
2/5/2015 01:54:39 am
That's a really interesting story! I feel really sorry for the poor hyena :( You included the prompt words very well.
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Tonya (100WC USA)
2/5/2015 04:44:59 am
I really enjoyed reading your story. You fully engage the reader with your story elements. Keep on writing!
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Pat Adamson Team 100 Canada
2/8/2015 05:12:45 am
You have created a very interesting story that makes the reader feel very sorry for the hyena. I like your word choice (curl up and die, swooped and scoffed)
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Dr D (Team 100WC, Derby, England)
2/8/2015 05:09:51 pm
Thank you for sharing your 100WC with the world. This is a well written piece based on some tricky keywords - well done. I enjoyed reading this and they style of your writing was pleasing - I wanted to have more to read! Keep writing :)
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