One rainy day me and my friends went to explore in the woods. We saw a door, a door wrapped in vines and leaves. Bob opened the door .We saw a bird standing in front of the door we were going to go in but then the bird spoke and said "you shall not pass" move out of the way said Bob. The bird suddenly grabbed a stick and froze Bob. I tried to runaway but he froze me too. Then suddenly I woke up sitting on a stone couch.
Mrs Hames
2/27/2015 04:27:07 am
Some lovely ideas, well done. I like the way your ending suggests that it was all a dream. This isa good device.
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Adam D
2/27/2015 05:54:41 am
Umer a really good story.
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