The weather was perfect for my ultimate adventure. The sun was out and there was no rain and the best thing was that I was in the forest of Brazil. I got all the stuff I need for the adventure. But just when I was about to go out I heard a knock on the door. I went to open the door I saw a zombie ahhhhhhhh. It’s a zombie apocalipse. I pushed the zombie out of the way and ran as fast as I could. But I tripped and fell it was to late I was gonna turn into a zombie but then.....
Miss Willing
3/28/2015 04:19:42 pm
Hi Umer. I liked the setting for your ultimate adventure. Was your house in the forest in Brazil? I was a little surprised at that! I would have liked to have known more about what the planned adventure was going to be. You’ve left your story on a good cliff hanger - I’d like to know what was going to happen next.
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