It was dark and the rain was pouring down on me I couldn’t see a thing. The house lighs were off. It was 11:30, I could hear screams coming from around the corner. Gun shots were going off. A slight uneasyness fell over me, I just wanted to be home, in my bed about to fall asleep. But instead im out here all on my own with nobody to take me in. I could here footsteps behind me, somebody was running towards me. I ran for my life not even daring to look back, and the gun went off again......
Miss Finch (Team 100wc)
2/3/2015 03:27:48 am
Wow, a super piece of writing Shannon. You have tried very hard and succeeded!) to create a piece of atmospheric writing. I love how you have 'shown not told' the reader what it feels like to be in your story!
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