I was suddenly woken by screaming. There was water on the floor. I rushed out to the deck and saw lots of people. " Whats happening " I asked. " There's a child here " said one of the men that were putting people into life boats. I didn't want to get on one of the life boats but I had to. In the boat I saw something with x marks the spot on it. We stopped at a island. It was the same one that was on the map so I followed it until I fell into a hole. I Screamed for help but nobody heard me.
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Holly
4/23/2015 01:33:03 am
WOW what a great story I wold not get into the life boat either. Keep up the great work
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Mrs Gill (Team 100WC)
5/1/2015 01:51:45 pm
What a great idea for the story, Caitriona. It certainly seems as though your luck was out that day having to abandon ship and then just as the reader thinks you're about to find treasure perhaps you fall down a hole. I wonder if this is the beginning of a quest as you finally escape?
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