I saw a hyena trying to climb a wall I was laughing but I thought to myself whats a hyena doing in the cold Ireland well I said what ever I'm just going to leave it so I did I look back and the hyena was looking at me I said ain't nobody got time for that I went back home and eat me some sandwich then I saw a grey top I wore it and then I went to my room and played my xbox and I was saying to myself yolo baby like yolo for life bye guys.
Adam
2/5/2015 01:41:48 am
very good Gbenga i really like it
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Peter Roche
2/5/2015 01:56:33 am
I don't think you put a huge effort in this week Gbenga. I think you can do better. The story is a little rambling but it is quite humorous. You made absolutely no effort with your punctuation
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