This was the most boring day out. I wanted to go to the beach, but mam and dad made me go to this stupid maze. They said it would be good fun. Ah yes, because getting lost in a maze is very fun isn't it? Like, you could be there all day and never get out. I decided to stay outside of the maze. It wasn't going to be good. So as they turned the corner, out of view, I was all alone. Hours had passed and I could hear screams. What was going on? My parents never came back.
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Mr. Roche
3/19/2015 04:38:13 am
This is a really original story Shannon. I love the moody sulky nature of your main character. This is great. I also like the way you don't really know where the story is going to go until near the end. That is great.
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