The streets were dark. The street lamps were glowing but they weren't any help whatsoever. He turned on his phone, probably to use it as a torch, and gave it to her. She took it silently and held it out in front of her. It was an upgrade but the darkness still creeped up on them. As they turned the corner they caught a glimpse of a light, a bright light...a very bright light that was growing by the second and getting closer and closer and closer. Then there was the brakes, the car sliding along... and the scream...
Mr Roche
3/19/2015 04:44:01 am
Really good work Bevin, that is a great story. The ending is particularly fantastic! There is such finality in those last words. Some great adjectives and adverbs too. For reason I particularly like the phrase "she took it silently".
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