Here I begin my ultimate adventure. Going to the Amazon rainforest. My friend and I will go together. When we got on the plane I took out my computer and tweeted I’m going to Amazon with Billy hope the plane doesn’t crash or do we. We laughed so much that our faces went purple. A few minutes later BOOM! The plane had crashed. Everyone on the plane was dead but me even Billy. I found my way through the ruble of the plane. I was all alone. Nothing around me but trees, bushes, more trees, frogs, tigers, trees… wait tigers.
3/26/2015 07:26:47 am
Good story, hopefully there won't really be any more plane crashes like that awful one in the news this week. Your sentences are lovely, one thing, you used two tenses you said you will go and then you changed to when we got , we often do this and our teacher says we should stick with one tense! Really good job hope your enjoying the 100wc as much as we are!
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