As they turned the corner they were blinded by another car’s headlights. They swerved around the car and plummeted of the edge of the dark mountain. They screamed as they fell. The car hit the ground with a huge bang! The other car stopped. Instantly the door flew open. A man got out and rushed over to the edge of the cliff were the car had fell. The man looked shocked. He called 911. When the ambulance arrived it was too late. Everyone in the car had died. My Granddad closed the book "time to go to sleep" he said. I will never get to sleep.
As they turned the corner they were blinded by another car’s headlights. They swerved around the car and plummeted of the edge of the dark mountain. They screamed as they fell. The car hit the ground with a huge bang! The other car stopped. Instantly the door flew open. A man got out and rushed over to the edge of the cliff were the car had fell. The man looked shocked. He called 911. When the ambulance arrived it was too late. Everyone in the car had died. My Granddad closed the book "time to go to sleep" he said. I will never get to sleep.
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Mr Roche
3/19/2015 04:31:17 am
Great work Adam. Really good use of descriptive words. They really help to create a wonderfully tense atmosphere. I also like the ending, particularly the "I'll never get to sleep bit".
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