Jim will never be the same. It all started when we went to the cineama. Before the movie we had our lunch and ate a sandwich. After lunch we went into the cinema and the movie was a about a grey misrable hyena who became king. After that movie Jim was going to see a hyena. He went to a village and they had to wait for darkness. Jim couldn’t wait. He wanted to climb to the top of the hill. He sneaked out and climbed to the top. a hungry hyena started chasing him.
Ms Maddison (Ireland) Team 100WC
2/9/2015 07:12:06 am
Well done, Frances, I really enjoyed your 100WC and you managed to use all five prompt words! You came up with a clever sentence that used three of the prompt words, well done! I wonder what happened to Jim after the hyena started chasing him? Great work and sorry I was late posting my comment!
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Lachlan Australia
2/11/2015 07:45:51 pm
it was a very good story but it had the phrase "climb to the top" twice in quick succession but keep up the good work
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