I looked up & let out a sigh. I started to climb the mountain. Half way up I saw a miserable, grey hyena. I hoped that he hadn’t seen me, but I was unlucky & next thing I knew he was running towards me. He looked hungry so I started running away. Unfortunately he reached me, & started to talk? He said that he was lonely & hadn’t eaten. I said that he shouldn’t eat me for I wouldn’t taste good. He laughed & said he’s vegetarian. So I gave him my sandwich & he helped me to the top.
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Humaira
2/6/2015 03:56:46 am
Hello Emma,
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Sissi (St Mary's Deane primary school)
2/6/2015 03:59:59 am
Hello Emma,
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2/6/2015 04:17:56 am
Hello Emma, We are simply blown away by your impressive 100wc. We like how it is set out on a mountain because it is different to other stories such as snow stories or diaries. We also love how you have used adjectives such as 'miserable', 'unlucky' and 'reached'. Finally we like how you have used personification. Great work!
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Hannah
2/6/2015 04:19:46 am
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Tyler & Kishan
2/6/2015 04:19:47 am
Hello Emma
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