What did it mean . The picture hanging crookedly on the wall . I was only 8 at the when I found out . It was a raining day like usual . My parents were out and I was alone and lonely. This was my first time home alone and the last . I was on the balcony with the wind blowing in my face and then it happened the wind got stronger and stronger the picture flow from the kitchen wall. there were the same the picture and the road. I was scared and I was slipping until …….
Maria
1/28/2015 06:08:22 am
thats soon cool but u miss spelt some stuff.
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Miss Anand Team 100 WC London
2/8/2015 05:22:41 am
Well done Caitriona, this is an intriguing story. Remember to include the words from the prompt next time.
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Mrs. Vreeland @ Team 100 NJ USA
2/9/2015 07:54:44 am
Interesting story Citriona. Some things to remember for the future, include the prompt, otherwise you cannot be considered for the weekly showcase. Also, please read work and see if you can find the little errors, such as words out of place. Keep up the good work.
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