It's Friday today and we are going to Clare, Mam told me to hurry, so I just took my book (cause I love reading) and rushed out the door. On the road trip Dad was driving and Mam was just telling him were turn and were to go from a map. "Were is Clare on the map Mum?" said Ashley (my sister.) "See the x ye the x marks the spot (Clare),"said Mum. Ashley was on her tablet playing Temple Run and I was of course reading a book.When we got there we went exploring everywhere. Clare was so fun!!!!!
It's Friday today and we are going to Clare, Mam told me to hurry, so I just took my book (cause I love reading) and rushed out the door. On the road trip Dad was driving and Mam was just telling him were turn and were to go from a map. "Were is Clare on the map Mum?" said Ashley (my sister.) "See the x ye the x marks the spot (Clare),"said Mum. Ashley was on her tablet playing Temple Run and I was of course reading a book.When we got there we went exploring everywhere. Clare was so fun!!!!!
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Mr. Roche
4/23/2015 02:35:41 pm
That's interesting Rosana, you decided not to go down the pirate or treasure route at all. Something different - well done! There are some mistakes, particularly around the middle of the story, with speech marks. Have another look and ask me for help.
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